Ok, I couldn't wait to submit him. I want to take my time on him though, practice new techniques I'm learning. So the finished version probably won't be out for a while. Any advice is golden.
Added some more to him, got carried away with the hair. Also for this one I'd advise to full view.
Looks really cool so far!
I'm not sure if this is on purpose or not, though, but he seems kinda blurry. And something about the torso seems... off.
And also, he looks like a girl, but THAT can't be helped in his case, can it? XD
I look forward to seeing the finished product!
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Thank you. And yes I have a bad habit with making my pictures blurry, I'm trying to break away from it though.
I didn't notice his torso, do you think I should add a bit more belly? Now that you mention it, it just kind of cuts off at the jaket, thanks for pointing that out to me.
You're welcome. :3
Well, also, it seems like it's just twisting in a weird way, like the shirts collar makes it look like the torso is at a different angle at that part than the rest of the torso.
I'm not really sure what I'm trying to say, but that might be as much as my brain can handle.
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Very nice! I love how you made him looks so feminine. (more so than usual!) The hair looks great.
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I'm not sure if this is on purpose or not, though, but he seems kinda blurry. And something about the torso seems... off.
And also, he looks like a girl, but THAT can't be helped in his case, can it? XD
I look forward to seeing the finished product!
--
"Are you actually buying something today, or are you just curious?"
"Well, let's just say that I'm 'buy-curious....'"
I didn't notice his torso, do you think I should add a bit more belly? Now that you mention it, it just kind of cuts off at the jaket, thanks for pointing that out to me.
He kinda reminds me of Kuja...
Well, also, it seems like it's just twisting in a weird way, like the shirts collar makes it look like the torso is at a different angle at that part than the rest of the torso.
I'm not really sure what I'm trying to say, but that might be as much as my brain can handle.
--
"Are you actually buying something today, or are you just curious?"
"Well, let's just say that I'm 'buy-curious....'"
--
"Hey, Danielle, is this a cookie?"
"No, it's a dog treat."
"Seriously though, is this a dog treat?"
"...Yeah, sure, why not?"
"-takes a bite- ...It taste like it has peanuts in it."
"Dude! I can't beleive you actually ate that!!"
-True story : D
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"I did battle with ignorance today, and ignorance won." - Huey Freeman, The Boondocks.
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Son of a submariner!
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"I did battle with ignorance today, and ignorance won." - Huey Freeman, The Boondocks.
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